Argumentation
The past Governor of Massachusetts, Mitt Romney is against abortion. He believes that every life should be accounted for. Today, there is a lack of military fortitude. Romney claims he will increase the strength of armed forces to fortify America. If a person is captured, Romney does not believe that water boarding is a type of torture. If a person is captured one should be punished. According to Romney’s claims, education for illegal immigrants should not be allowed under any circumstances.Federal funding in schools should be reserved for Americans. In response to the Colorado shooting, Romney petitions that “tougher” gun laws should be passed. Weapons have degraded our safety in public areas in previous years, and the problem should be addressed. As for financial plans, Romney plans to recover the economic crisis by lowering taxes, establishing the characteristics of a balanced budget and pursuing fair trade deals to spur growth in the economy to essentially offset the autopilot bailout. Cap Federal spending will be cut to 20% of Gross Domestic Project to keep a balanced budget. To further improve education, Romney supports the “No Child Left Behind Law,” where each state will be required to develop assessments in basic skills in order to receive federal funding. If Romney is elected, Romney promises to support oil drilling to lower the cost of gas prices. Additionally, Romney will protect the status quo for people and raise the retirement age and reduce inflation in benefits for wealthier receptionists. The Minimum tax for individuals will be essentially be eliminated if Romney is elected.
I really like how you gave a lot of detail and backed up you points with evidence. I think you would've been more successful if you would've had a thesis at the beginning instead of just starting it saying that Mitt Romney is against abortion.
ReplyDelete